You came at a bad time

Avatar Author: Steve Saylor Steve Saylor is currently a Student at Humber College in the Radio Broadcasting program. Steve is a New Media Specialist and has worked in this field since Spring of 2005. Steve has either been a producer or a host of ... Read Bio

“What the hell?” Tucker was angry, he felt like this “thing” was violating his wife by appearing just like her.

“We do apologize Tucker, we thought being in this form would be easier for you,” Fake Brenda said.

“Well change into something else! You have no right!” Tucker screamed.

“We would but our spheres are only limited to forms inside your mind. This was the first image we saw,” Fake Brenda replied.

“What the hell do you want?! And who’s this we?”

“Forgive us, we are not of your world. We are from a neighboring galaxy sent here via probes to send Earth a message.”

“Why me?”

“You are unique, however there are other probes interacting with your kind as we speak relaying the same message.” Fake Brenda smiled.

Shivers went down Tucker’s spine, this “thing” had her smile! “What’s the message?”

“That we are coming.”

“Coming? Who’s coming? Why?” Tucker said afraid of the answer.

“We are coming to destroy you,” Fake Brenda smiled again. “We apologize for the inconvenience.”

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  1. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    great stand alone piece! haha,sorry for the inconvenience.

  2. Avatar eclectickid

    wow spooky… like the ‘fake brenda’ references. haha

  3. Avatar Steve Saylor

    Thanks for the comments! I like it as a standalone piece too. I definitely have more cooking with this series, we’ll see how it goes.

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