Not the Best Time to Forget Something

Avatar Author: Nickel I've written some fairly mediocre stuff in the past, and now I'm hoping to go past that and maybe achieve 'average'. Still hoping to pick up some skills from the writers I see here - I'm hoping absurdly that maybe if I ha... Read Bio

“I do,” she whispered, holding out her hand. He froze. “The ring!

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  1. Avatar Nickel

    Erk! I republished this under a different title already! How do I delete this?

  2. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    Haha, one of the most comedic of these little mini-stories I’ve found. Nice job cramming a lot into 12 words.

  3. Avatar Mostly Harmless

    Alas, Wolfy, both stories were entered into a challenge – and once a story’s in a challenge there’s no going back!

    Still, as THX said you got a lot into the twelve words, it didn’t feel forced at all… Good work! MH :)

  4. Avatar Nickel

    Thanks, people! I thought it was a bit silly, but I was half asleep and couldn’t resist. :)

    And anyways, as a side note I’d like to say that I’ve liked many of both your stories. Moar plz. :P

  5. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    i wonder how often this happens? and not in a movie…

  6. Avatar Nickel

    It’s probably gonna happen to me. I’ve an uncanny knack of forgetting things at all the wrong times.