Good writing usually makes decisions, good decisions at that. This piece of writing made no decisions, and it exemplified that well. But it’s not a very enjoyable read, I must admit. You probably knew that but just rolled along with it. I do that sometimes, it’s important to detach from trying to produce masterpieces all the time and just experiment and see what happens. So with that said, I do find something redeeming about this ficly.
Tad Winslow