The greatest decision everr

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“It’s spiked. And you don’t look like the type of girl who can handle being drunk… No definitely not. Maybe some water?”

Excuse me! What gave this random boy the right to baby me?

I grabbed a cup of the punch. I downed it all. That probably wasn’t that great of a decision.

HA! What was he talking about? This punch is perfectly fi -
Suddenly I collapsed straight on top of the boy.

“Didn’t you bring a date? Or could you just not resist the urge to dance with me?”

I couldn’t believe this guy…

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  1. Avatar .:Band Baby:.

    hm… the line “that probably wasn’t that great of a decision” seems a little, uhm, redundant… like, to many that’s. It could just be me, but it through me for a minute.

    Other wise, nice peice.

  2. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    Time is watching.. we are Time.. we can hear his muttering, she can’t, she’s collapsed, so why does it say ‘I couldn’t believe this guy’? She must come to after the collapse..

  3. Avatar Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    jelly legs?

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