Riding the bus

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Standing in the crowded bus, with the body shacking, eyes gazed Sugar Loaf somewhat shaky because of slips of the road. Head with thoughts far away, the heat made ​​me go back to the point where I was. Below me was reading a quiet girl, as if a bubble involves a parallel world (I’d give anything to penetrate). It is so pretty quiet people watching …

In his hands, the book gave little sobs of the girl leaning on her lap. I could read the name of the chapter opened: “Man is condemned to freedom.”

I started thinking … Freedom is a tie even. The power of choice is a prison volunteer. Owning itself means that all roads in the world can be yours! The responsibility to be completely autonomous in their choice weighs much more than an iron ball attached to the foot of the damned. It is much easier to accept the weight of the ball and deduce that it is there that your days will be given, than to have nothing that will impose one place. What to do when nothing binds you?

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  1. Avatar Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)

    Goodness this is strange. Surreal, or deep in thought. Contemplating the meaning of freedom on a bus.

  2. Avatar Mi_UFF

    Thank you!
    Amazing how I get lost in thought when I’m on a bus. This happens to you? =p

  3. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    That was really hard to follow. Honestly, I couldn’t get past the first paragraph. Maybe I’m just too tired right now to get the stylistic aspect to it, but it seemed really disjointed. Neat thoughts and some good images, but the grammar is so jumbled it’s hard to make sense of it.

  4. Avatar Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)

    Sometimes on long trips that happens to me. :P

  5. Avatar Mi_UFF

    THX 0477, I appreciate your thoughts. The line of thought is not even something very consistent … The structure of the text sought to show just that. :)

  6. Avatar Mi_UFF

    Princess, I could take a question? That means (LOA)? I saw some users with this phrase in their nicknames … =p

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