Brutal and excellent, like an old blues song about lost romance. Loved the line about spazmodic rainbows, really captured the feel of Tokyo, not that I’ve been there. Awesome entry.

I agree with THX. You’ve really captured a sense of a dichotomy within Tokyo (a place of magic but also stifling), giving it a kind of character that is so essential in good story telling. You too have captured something so Murakami-esque, that I am totally impressed.

This was awesome. :) I could really see this continuing on, like something in a novel. XD

I love how visual this is – has great texture but in sound and imagery.