Hellhound

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As I tripped, the beast took advantage. With a sudden leap, it drove me into the ground like a pitchfork into manure. I took a sudden, asphalt filled breath as the wind was knocked out of me. Why do they keep following me home?! With a sigh, and an upward lurch, I pulled myself out of the ground painfully, took out my gun, and shot it. I wish the old man would stop sending all the hounds of hell after me. I know I’m his daughter’s first suitor, but for Christ’s sake! I paused, wiping the blood away from my mouth caused by cuts that had disapeared. Maybe my association with up above was what he hated so much about me.

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  1. Avatar Apocalypse

    Wow, when I was writing mine, I didn’t even like it. Didn’t know it was gonna become relatively popular. Anyway, nice sequel.

  2. Avatar g2LaPianistaIrlandesa

    Hm, now this is an interesting turn. This implies that this isn’t the first time this has happened to this poor guy.

  3. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    Nice way of waving a lot of elements together and in a way I didn’t even picture. It reads well, but it’s a departure from the style of the other two. It works fine, but in the future I’d like to challenge you to use sequels and prequels as opportunities to experiment with a style you might not otherwise use, like stream-of-consciousness.

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