My weather poem

Avatar Author: MissEve Just another writer around the corner. Read Bio

(My little sister’s attempt at poetry)

Cloud
You are very fluffy
Why are you white?
You should change color
For fun.

You are so high
Do you want to come down?
If I were you I would come down
Once in a while

You are so cool
Are you really made of water?
If I were you I would share coolness
More often

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  1. Avatar JonB

    Simple and delightful, as the world should be, through the eyes of a child.

    Congratulations to your little sister – this is a nice read.

  2. Avatar MissEve

    Your comment made my sister’s day. Thank you so much.

  3. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    Very cute little poem and definitely easy to picture and hear this little scene as the child looks up to question the cloud.

    Makes me miss childhood.

  4. Avatar MissEve

    Thank you so much for your kind comments.

  5. Avatar Cariad Ceffyl

    This was delightful- as with Kid Art, I love children’s poetry as well- my son wrote a poem when he was three for a contest about invertebrates. It IS so wonderful to look at the world through a child’s Eyes- That We All Would Still

  6. Avatar ...Still BARomero

    This is beautiful in its wondrous simplicity. I loved it!

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