Haha. Love the confidence of the main character, and enjoyed the dialogue.

There are some words that may need to be seperated.

“Not everygirl” Not every girl
“You dont know? The new is all around school.!” It should only be a elcamation mark or a period.

Sorry if it seems I’m picky, but little things like that give your more letters to use.

No, is fine! I love the advice! This is more of an older story though, try and check out my new ones!