A different kind of epic

Avatar Author: j. smthng The best thing I ever wrote was a cheesy poem-satire about unrequited chocobo love. ... Also, I can get pretty verbose sometimes. The Ficly stories are good for me because I'm making an effort not to sequel myself (an... Read Bio

Falling fast, he pumped his legs uselessly, felt a ledge slip through his fingers, then fell past the behemoth altogether. 5,000 ft to go…

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  1. Avatar DoItForScience

    Where’d he jump off of, Angel Falls?

  2. Avatar StudMuffin (LoA)

    Jesus christ thats high

  3. Avatar StudMuffin (LoA)

    Nice though.
    I like the…..
    idk. I like it. lol

  4. Avatar StudMuffin (LoA)

    oh yeah,

  5. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    must’ve been somewhere like Angel Falls..
    while he’s falling he could brush his teeth, or read, or call his mom, or macgyver a glider from a paperclip, rubber band, and his pants..

  6. Avatar Radical Yellow Duck

    Actually he would only have about 18 seconds.

    Maybe the behemouth was king kong. Or a dirigible.

    Or a really big duck. A yellow duck.

    Yeah… I like that image.

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  9. Avatar j. smthng

    It doesn’t have to be on Earth… I wanted to make sure the next sequeler (hint hint) had enough time to do something interesting. Also, I have no sense of height scale. :)

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Jack Shelley tore wildly through the jungle and threw himself headlong o’er the cliff, plummeting toward the steam-powered behemoth bel...

How's that for epic? by Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

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