The Joys Of Unrequited Love

Amj Author: Lone Writer "Life is an endless parade of stupidity, with no rain in sight." -Lone Writer _Proud Member of the League of Awesomeness!_ *Captiness of the High Seas of Awesomeness* ~!@!@#@$@%$!~ *SERIES I'M IN:* *Welcome T... Read Bio

For some reason I can’t explain
You make my each and every day
And every time you look my way
Its hard to get my heart to stay
In my chest where it belongs

I know you don’t think you’re much
But being near you is a must
We talk each and every day
You would never guess I feel this way
You really are remarkable

With just one glance from your clear blue eyes
I feel my heartbeat start to rise
I know you must feel a little surprise

The way you listen to my words
The way you smile at my fears
The way you wipe away my tears
By just a little sentence

I don’t know what to do with myself
I can’t really be with anybody else
You got into my heart with matchless stealth
But for you it isn’t the same

Or is it? I never can tell.

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  1. Amj Lone Writer

    Yeah, its awful, I know. I just had to get it out of my head.

  2. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    no, this is good, it’s the story of falling in love. too bad the other person doesn’t show it back outwardly.

  3. Avatar emily.ruth

    I really, really like the arrangement/rhyme scheme of the first stanza. The rest is good too, but I thought that part deserved special attention. :)

  4. Avatar Raegan Dauterive

    aww, it’s always hard to go through that.

  5. Avatar Scott

    I agree with beauty, the first stanza’s scheme is fantastic, and sold me on reading the rest.

    My thought would be that the “ninja stealth” sort of takes me out of it right there at the end – I mean, don’t get me wrong, I appreciate a good ninja as much as the next guy, but it seemed sort of goofy following the rest of the poem.

  6. Amj Lone Writer

    Yeah I know, I’m working on a better word…

  7. Amj Lone Writer

    Better word found! …Hopefully.