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I kicked my locker again, cursing underneath my breath as I finally yanked it open. As I got my books, I was deafened by a loud squeal from my right. I looked over to see a group of cheerleaders flirting obnoxiously with some guys with perfect hair.
“Hey whats wrong with you?” I turned around to see my friend Angela walking towards me.
Them” I said glaring at the preps. “And this… stupid…” I finally slammed the door, “uhg. This stupid locker!” I said leaning against it.
“Oh god, here comes someone who’ll make it better.” Angela said with her usual half disgusted, half adoring tone.
I turned to see my boyfriend, Josh, walking towards me. He wore his usual plaid button-up shirt and khakis. Very different, I thought, as I looked down at my outfit, black skinny jeans and my marching band shirt, with a black and red zip-up hoodie, and my converse with checkered laces.
Josh came over and put his arm around me, I barely noticed that Angela left.
“Good morning,” He said, as he leaned in to kiss me gently.

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  1. Avatar ethelthefrog

    Pleasant way to start a morning. Plenty of conflict here. Makes for a promising beginning.

  2. Avatar Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Ah, the joys of youth. Sounds like a start of another high school series. Couple of typos snuck (yes spell-checker that is a word!) in though. underneathe→underneath, skinney→skinny

  3. Avatar Match

    Very nice introduction to the characters, and a good setup for a long line of stories…

    One minor nitpick – "here he comes he’ll make it better.” doesn’t read smoothly – maybe something like ‘here he comes, he’ll make it better’, or ‘here comes someone who’ll make it all better.’ ?

  4. Avatar Raegan Dauterive

    Promising. They sound like an interesting couple.

  5. Avatar Marli

    uh uh oh. Looks like she is noticing she is different from the smart prep set. mmmm

  6. Avatar SieRawr12

    trust me these two are boring especially the guy total loser…haha jk