yeah it’s not action packed, but the climax can be emotional too..

aaah, cute.

Very good! A little backstory, something that wouldn’t be in the actual climax, but it works in this piece. I love it!

“Matching dimples formed.” Great sentence!

Great interpretation.

i just couldn’t do it without a little backstory..

this is sooo sweet. I like
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Very cute and emotional.

yeah this was cute and heartwarming
i like the matching dimples it was a nice touch.