Comments on A Room with a View (Sci-Fi Me Challenge) by Radical Yellow Duck

Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)

Saturn was beautifully described. And nice touch with the sibling rivalry.
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Horrorfan13

This was good. I like the jab at the makers of the Saw movies.
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 3 out of 5
THX 0477

I liked the insertion of the very typical family dynamics issues into your sci-fi setting. Good job also getting across something of their individual characters and viewpoints.
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
kaellinn18

The “in” between “milk” and “just” seems redundant to me, but I like the rest. I, too, enjoyed the jab at the Saw movies. I really hope there aren’t 23 of those…
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 3 out of 5
Radical Yellow Duck

corrected
- Posted about 10 years ago.
Abstract

The trap of letting Jigsaw’s victims die in the vacuum of space got old after Saw XVI…
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Mr.Gabriel

Haha, loved it.
But you put a comma after the quotaition when she says

“You know I hate that stuff,”

I’m pretty sure it goes inside the quotes. (:
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

I love that you threw in Saw 23, made me laugh, even though I agree with the Saturn gazer, which sounds beautiful by the way, and I would stay home.
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
illusionistic

I absolutely love this, It’s just great as it is.
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5