wow! will it continue?

This is good! Thanks for entering!

I really like the idea behind this. I think this one phrase different thought popped into his head for a change does break the rythm of the piece. Maybe something like Just as he was entering the bridge, a swirl of options joined the screaming sirens and flashing lights.

I loved the suspense and movement of the story, but I found your use of paragraphs (or the way you strung the sentences together) distracting.

that was really cool. you should make a sequel. =)