You’re obviously a very devout atheist. One of those people who hate every religion. I don’t see how you can blame religion for disease. I can’t say I like it because I think it’s distasteful.
While I agree with much of this, I really think the final stanza is the most appropriate.
The first stanza doesn’t quite flow as well as the others. I think the word “stood” is what’s throwing me off. I think I’d prefer to see “stand,” or “once stood.” Other than that, I liked the poem, and applaud that it contains a message. Especially a controversial one, which usually makes for a much more interesting read.
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