I really like the idea behind this. Santa as a player! What will Mrs. Claus say!
Nicely written :)

Funny. It made me think of a modern redux on the whole ‘I Saw Mommy Kissing Santa Claus’ song, only it’s the guy’s girlfriend. Very amusing. Not high art or anything, but funny.

P.S.
Debra, I hope you get trampled by reindeers

awesome!

I like the whole ideal of it and the anger towards the fat bastard.

This is hilarious! Totally not what I expected from the warm and fuzzy holidays. xD

irreverently funny…definately in need of a Santa rebuttal for a sequel.

Funny. It kind of reminds me of when my best friend and I were taking turns writing a book and she decided that the main character’s mom would have sex with Santa lol. I wonder what a sequel would be like for this… hmm…

Funny. Enjoyed the voice of the angry boyfriend.

The postscript made this for me. This was hilarious!

LOL

lol that was one of the best stories i’ve read today.you should make a sequel were Santa writes back. that would be funny. =D

fat people should be punished

I love the concept. I give this five stars.

Funny, I loved it! :D

You already had two sequels, but I couldn’t resist giving you another.