This is quite a moving poetic piece, but there’s a few confusing parts…for example: That if you asked me, ever, “Who proves that statement wrong?” I’d say, “Her.” changing it to “That if anyone asked me” or instead change it to "I’d say, “ You .” " It would make more sense, unless I’m missing the context of the story. Also, a minor edit: “You’re were strong” should be You not You’re