a prayer, but alas, all too often temptation pulls the darlings away.

This is quite a moving poetic piece, but there’s a few confusing parts…for example:
That if you asked me, ever, “Who proves that statement wrong?”
I’d say, “Her.”
changing it to “That if anyone asked me” or instead change it to "I’d say, “ You .” " It would make more sense, unless I’m missing the context of the story. Also, a minor edit: “You’re were strong” should be You not You’re

Touching and tragic. Not a sentiment or situation I’ve heard too often, so that struck me.

Krulltar – thank you! I made those changes. It’s the little things like that that I never realize as I’m typing.