oww..
Whoa, really descriptive.. but scary..
I wonder what’s actually going on..
interesting.

Thanks for the kind words. I’m wondering what is going on myself! ;)

cringes
I really, really hope that crackling was electrical…
I’d recommend a paragraph break or two in there, but otherwise nicely done, a great continuation.

Creepy, and I couldn’t help but wonder how PR would handle the situation. Which is probably more morbid than the above rather disheartening (and subsequently enthralling) description.

Okay, this is the last straw!
(dons suit and tie)
Headgear Inc, you’re going down!