Comments on snowy sidewalks [poem] by g²LaPianistaIrlandesa

iLive The Avant-Garde Way

simple but effective!
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Treebeard's Ghost

Wow! So evocative, so much atmosphere. I love it. (Shouldn’t ‘sidewalks’ be singular ‘sidewalk’?)
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
g²LaPianistaIrlandesa

Ah, yeah it should be singular. Thanks for catching that; I just kind of whipped this up in a flurry (no pun intended).
- Posted about 10 years ago.
Blossom Ruoquen (LoA)

HA HA! A flurry. HAH! that’s so.. snigger PUNNY! AHAHA! ahem I mean- this was so cute in a sad way. The snow wanted a little ride only to be thumped off by the oblivious pedestrian >.< There was a nice flow to this poem and the imagery was there while still allowing room for the readers’ interpretations :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5