Wow. Very interested to know her secret! Only suggestion I would make is that his name is used a little too much. The beginning really got me as he starts the letter with his name and writes it again in the first line. Just read a little choppy for me. Very cryptic and open for a lot. Good stuff.
Wow. Very interested to know her secret!
Only suggestion I would make is that his name is used a little too much. The beginning really got me as he starts the letter with his name and writes it again in the first line. Just read a little choppy for me.
Very cryptic and open for a lot. Good stuff.
Cid