Hmmm… The progression of the plot is good here, but there are some distracting features. You need spaces after all your commas and speech marks, PLEASE for the love of God write the word ‘thousands’ instead of ’1000’s’ and make sure Robin’s question has a question mark… Also the phrasing of that last sentence is a bit confused – I get what you mean but it could do with some clarification… Decent enough, but little things distracted from the actual story, MH :)

Oh God! my English teacher would kill me if she saw this (literally, she’s nuts). I hate proof reading as proved in the above story haha. Thank you for the suggestions unfortunately I was running out of characters and i didn’t want to write another sequel with 2 sentences in it so I won’t be able to fix them! But i promise I won’t let this happen again!
And I agree about the last sentence but i had no clue how to write what i wanted to :/ suggestions?

ah so Robin IS Heathcliff.. :P

lol Strategic boy. I can guess that it might be another romance book she gets. xD

Hahaha, your english teacher would have killed you indeed.

And my God you’ve been busy. I go to a swim meet for three hours, come back and you’ve written maybe….10 ficlys! Jeez.

reading on…

Hmm, this is a cute dialogue and I enjoy. The no spaces between the commas irritated me, but other than that I like this.

I don’t know about the “love affair” but if you are going to write about great books you are going to have my attention. Let’s carry on!