airforce.. yes, they hadn’t accounted for that, captain doom and gloom nods.
A few tense problems here: lied should be lay, came should be come… But the story is good, with a character the very antithesis of Cpt. Jim – you’ve definitely nailed the chatacterisation aspect of the challenge. Thanks for entering, MH :)
A few tense problems here: lied should be lay, came should be come…
But the story is good, with a character the very antithesis of Cpt. Jim – you’ve definitely nailed the chatacterisation aspect of the challenge. Thanks for entering, MH :)
Oops! I’ll fix it.
ElshaHawk (LoA) 
Mostly Harmless 
The Silence [All By Myself] {LoA}