A stunning return to the site Aurelia… I hope nobody gets funny about the extra lines and lack of a ‘Z’ line – it’s all written so well it honestly doesn’t matter!

You tell a good story, and the structure of the challenge suits it perfectly. A very well done…! MH:)

Oh you’re not missing a ‘Z’ line! I was being stupid… Just extra lines then. But they’re great anyhoo so mehh. MH :)

Wow, I like how this is a story. This is very good. I see that you even continued your story, past all the letters. It is cool to see that the challenge could take you somewhere :)
Thank you for entering.

It’s a good almost-ballad. Well done.
Abby
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so, wait… does the xanax and zinfandel lead to the feelings of love, or is it the other way around?

And isn’t the combination of Xanax, zinfandel, and a hot tub slightly dangerous?

Great story and kept me engaged the whole time. So many poems about love lack strength and purpose. This is a great example of the correct way to write about love.

Wow. Really liked this one. Great visual clues.

Powerful failed suicidal ending. Love this one.

Thanks, guys, this was a fun challenge!