Comments on Wings by kaellinn18

J. A. Keane

Two syllables are left at the off-the-cliffhanger of your story:
WUH-OH!
Also, good introduction to a cool new character with wings. How strange…makes you wonder: How did he get them? Was he born with them? Is he a genetic experiment?
Which reminds me…Is this partially inspired by those Maximum Ride books by James Patterson?

J.A.K
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
kaellinn18

I’m familiar with James Patterson, but I’ve never read any of his work. This one was all me. Thanks for the comment!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
J. A. Keane

You’re very welcome! +))
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Mostly Harmless

Blimey she’s confident. You have a real skill for developing relationships in the space of one fic, and this is another example of that…

Very good! MH :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
someday_93

Ooh, I’m curious as to the whole wings thing also…really good.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
kaellinn18

There’s a fine line between confident and crazy. I’ll let you all decide which side she’s on. :-)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.