Oooooooooh! Never saw this coming, I must say! And you’ve captured the voice of the character quite well, too, so hats off to ya!
=))

This is an interesting take on the discovery of a superpower. Of course, changing the past here may have ultimately been for the better, since he knew the kind of person she was.

You never mess with the timestream, isn’t that the rule? (Although I suppose the fact that the superhero comic industry invented the term “retroactive continuity” says something about how precious the past really is…)

Nicely done.

I haven’t read the prequel yet, but this is interesting. I like how he remembers the years, months and days he was in love with her.

I guess love makes you count a lot.

One year…three months…eleven days…six hours…seventeen minutes. That…is when the relationship…will end.

(Sorry, but I couldn’t resist doing that.)