hahaha I love the title. I have had some crazy dreams in my lifetime….but none like this. Thanks for the laugh, it was needed :) Great entry!

While there are a few lines that sound a bit choppy (pencils dancing the disco in a flute has too many syllables in my opinion), they don’t really detract from this. Fantastic poem, and amusing ideas.

Nice idea, capturing the more random side of dreaming… I agree with Sam, watch your syllables, but the content is good – amusing.

Interesting entry! MH :)

That was awesome. It reminded me a bit of the Jabberwocky poem. Great stuff and fit the challenge perfectly while at the same time doing something a little different than just retelling a dream.

I was thinking of The Walrus and the Carpenter when I wrote the “Pork and Beans” bit.

Of sailing ships and sealing wax, of cabbages and kings…

I thought you’d taken some inspiration from Caroll there… MH :)