And so it was that Sam Ervin dreamed in single sentences.
Good job here, I hope you don’t get too much stick about the lack of full stops because it captures that rambling explanation of a dream before it vanishes from memory, and that’s clever.
Good work. Controversial, and technically flawed, but still good. MH :)
by Ds I mean double Ds because they were attached to this smoking hot lady, except she was made out of batteries so she really wasn’t very good looking
I guess after Mostly Harmless’ comment I can’t give you too much crap for the gigantic run-on sentence. Can I harp on starting said sentence with a conjunction? Weird dream, to be sure. I’m not even going to try to interpret that one.
Mostly Harmless
Catherine
THX 0477
The Note Writer