Wow! I’ve heard of people who like their voices…but I wonder how common it actually is. This seemed a bit stilted at first, but flowed into a really good ending. The last line makes me just want to give Violet a big hug =]

wait…alan…?!? Is Dr. Alan asian?!?!

I’m not sure what’s being said here, but by there shear obtuse nature of the scene I want to read more. There’s enough here to make me say eh! where does this go, and I definitely continue reading.
Brilliant