A leaf? Will that be OK? Everybody else has flowers you silly Prince, why pick a leaf!

Still, we return to the levels of flowing prose seen in previous installments – which is good. Don’t know about the repetition of lip-licking, is the Prince trying to imitate the dragon?

Still, I am left wondering what will happen next – are these leaves/flowers supposed to protect from some giant plume of flame? The possibilities are many, which is good…

Funtime Bobby, congratulations on a clear and commendable improvement in your writing over the course of this series, it’s been good fun to read and review. I look forward to the next installment! MH :)

Thanks!

Yeah, thanks for the catch of the echo of lip licking. I’m searching now for a better description of the fire.