Hunter’s analytical skills are well-written and interesting, but the language has gone past the point of neccessity and is just offensive and grating. This could be a perfectly good story without the ‘mature’ tag, I think you’re shooting yourself in the foot now. MH :)
Hunter’s analytical skills are well-written and interesting, but the language has gone past the point of neccessity and is just offensive and grating.
This could be a perfectly good story without the ‘mature’ tag, I think you’re shooting yourself in the foot now. MH :)
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