How do the audience receive him? What do the band think? Has he rediscovered the rock ‘n’ roll?
I really enjoyed this, something about your writing style really pulls me in… I think it’s because this character is clearly quite personal to you, and is very well written – there’s lots of ways he could go.
Maybe the next installment could be called ‘Crowd Surfing’? Maybe I’m being too hopeful for him… Oh well. MH :)
Mostly Harmless
J. A. Keane
Steve Saylor