A little confusing, seeing as it makes a U-turn pretty quickly… I liked the idea of love being so great that you’d let them go for it, but then you twisted it so he ended up stating anyway, which felt like a bit of a cop out…

Still, what’s their isn’t written badly – though it would benefit from clearer paragraphing methinks. MH :)

i love it i think it is well written and i love the plot twist at the end. i can totally relate to this and so can a few other ficly writers that i know very well. keep up the good writing