oooh….I love that. I never looked on an instrument as an intruder on a human relationship…
This was very good.
Well ye done,
Abby x
( I’d like it more if you wrote your numbers as words =D)

Clearly I can’t win the challenge with this, but the idea came and I HAD to write it…! MH :)

A bit creepy, but very good.

hahahahahahaha! it’s innocently dirty. i don’t think she really minds his idol worship as long as he wears the lederhosen to bed!

Wow, Ed.

Wow. That’s really… different.

Whoa. I agree with Mr. Gabriel. Very different…just another direction for a musical instrument. I love that she has a name =]

This is extremely clever and shows the power things can have over us. Good creepy vibe!

That. was. Hilarious! lol! I definitely appreciate the research put into this, and I think (as this was told from the wife’s pov) that it showed how much her husbands obsession had an affect on her. But hey, some people just need a little jazz – or Schüpbach – in their life.. :P

I liked the story, but it wasn’t until I saw the title again that I really dug it. Well done!