Well this is deep. Other than the conspicuous and infuriating lack of punctuation at the end of sentences, I found this quite therapeutic actually. Strangely.

The imagery is strong, well written and interesting, and that title is so much more original having read the story. I thought it was going to be about lost love or some other overwrought, clichéd piece – thankfully, how wrong I was. Well done. MH :)

Well, thanks, MH. I tend to shy away from correct grammar when I’m poetry-ing, but I see your point.

Glad to be of literary service, regardless.