Okay, crazy names always throw me and make it hard to follow, but it works for the story. Did they just say they should get the president? If so, that’s seems a bit random, that the snowball fight kids know the president. I guess it could work though. I’m rambling. Overall, a really fun way to keep the story moving but also interject a bit of fun and characterization.

Yeah, the last line feels a little bit more rushed than necessary. I don’t actually think it’s needed, and from what we know of the two, it seems unlikely that they can “get” the president. But maybe all will be explained.

Yeah, you both have a good point.
Thanks for the help!
Also: it had to be done at some point, so no time like the present to include a Star Wars reference in a SPACE OPERA challenge…
+))

Hmm, I agree that the last line kind of rushed the rest of the light hearted scene. I’m still reading on.

I really enjoyed this one more than the first installment. It flowed well and laid out a tangible scene with relatable characters.

I love that you’re tackling the language of the planet and giving them names out of the expected norm.