Lovely, quick little thing. Some run-on sentences, but they seemed to fit well with this guy’s state of mind, sort of hurriedly taking stock and going over things in this last few moments alive. I liked the ending especially. Something noble and cool about that statement.

James T Kirk? Is that you?

Just kidding! I think that it evokes a thought of something else is a good thing though. But that could just be me

Reminds me of the opening to a certain blockbuster SF movie from last year. :) Still, very nice.

“So much…it eventually.” <— This sentence is missing a comma. I had to read it a couple times before I got it properly. I think I spotted a comma splice too in another sentence.