Comments on Legend of Gabriél (14) by Mr.Gabriel

Mr.Gabriel

Dios = God

Abuela = grandmother

demonios = demons

Satanás = Satan

_ averiguar_ = figure out

mis padres = my parents
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Elisabeth L. Davis(LoA)

Cliffhanger. .
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
ElshaHawk (LoA)

I like the progression of his thoughts here.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
.:Band Baby:.

i like the last line. =)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Catherine

Well? What happens next?
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Mr.Gabriel

I’ll get to it tomorrow! >_<

Today I’m not in the mood.

Plus this builds up suspense.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
kaellinn18

I just caught up with this series. It’s definitely interesting! I enjoy the interjections of Spanish into the writing, but I don’t think that averiguar fits in your narrative here. Its placement seems forced, especially since it’s an unconjugated verb.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Mr.Gabriel

Fixed, K. Thanks for that.

And I’m glad you like it!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5