Comments on A Shot in the Dark by Gradual Uprising {LoA}

Mostly Harmless

Now I’m no Ozzy fan, but I do get this…

Very funny, almost squirm-inducing, and topical what with looking at the influence famous people have on young kids.

Think about breaking into clearer paragraphs because structurally this is poor in comparison to the content – stories that are easier to read will probably get more readers…

But anyhoo, I enjoyed it – a good take on the challenge for people who aren’t major followers of Ozzy’s work – MH :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Gradual Uprising {LoA}

what d’you think?
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Sam Ervin

The last line for me is particularly gruesome, but simultaneously awesome.

Well done, and thanks for entering!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
stargazer1960

Well done and interesting turn of events.
Jackson Pollock of blood droplets . . . now, I wish I’d thought of that. Clever.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
JLaughter001

I often think about biting the heads off of parakeets…but I just hate parakeets. I also often think about biting off the head of Ozzy Osbourne, for similar reasons. Right-o, was a fun read! Keep up the good ficlys!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Sam Ervin

Well, after a three-hour session spent carefully weighing each individual story (or perhaps eating cheese balls and listening to Megadeth), I’ve picked your story as the winner! Congratulations!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Gradual Uprising {LoA}

Yay!!! this is my first win ever!!!! (I don’t care if it’s by default)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.