Dude!
This is absolutely AMAZING!
Very poignant, cleverly structured and brilliantly written.
Well done!
+))

Nice. Simple. Elegant.

oh this is you just showing off. this is real magic at a convention of polyester suit wearing thin mustache rabbit conjerers. sorry for the msp but this is a gem.

Thanks for the support. I’m new at writing my stuff down. :)

Mighty-Joe-not really sure what your comment means, don’t really know the penmen’s jargon that you guys do. But I think you mean that you liked it, so thanks. :)

Nobody understands MJY. He’s an enigma wrapped in bacon.

But his comment is definitely praise. He’s saying that you’re doing real, authentic, supernatural magic, surrounded by a bunch of phony illusionists pulling rabbits out of their collective hats.

Agree with everyone above. This is the best entry so far! Nicely done!