Check your italicising, but with regards to structure and content this is a really original way of writing – if I were Bert I would be suitably impressed! MH :)

This was a very funny, creative take on the challenge. Well done.

I love how impersonal it is. It almost becomes really personal. Can’t explain it but my brain likes it.

Cute idea. If you’ve ever seen the show Dollhouse, I can only imagine a similar survey after one of their “dates.”

Cute and inventive. Good job!

I love the idea that somewhere there is a company that makes/trains boyfriends and is sending these out. I wonder what you would do if they took him back and tried to improve him though? Very light hearted tone which keeps the piece flowing. It’s very easy to when doing lists or some such thing for it to get repetitive or sluggish. This was neither. I liked it.