Oof!

Humiliation aplenty here, what a situation… I mean I guessed that something with coming because of the reference to ‘Tanner always butting in’ – that isn’t the kind of flyaway comment you’d make without following it up, but you still wrote the ending well – Andrew and Tanner are exceedingly selfish!

Good take on the challenge, though I’m glad I didn’t read it before I read the story or it might have given it away… MH :)

I LOVE YOU!

The shock, and betryal she felt, with the shamelessness of Tanner and Andrew is amazing.

Plus, you did my favorite thing ever… guy on guy.

Ouch.
Poor Mary. It was really her butting in on Andrew and Tanner though. Very nice ending.

she didn’t KNOW? oh poor blind Mary..

Interesting that Mary didn’t see this coming. Very well done.

If I were Mary I’d scream. And then try and slap them both…Poor Mary. If Tanner’s always butting in, he either likes Mary or he likes Andrew. I agree with See More, why didn’t she see that coming?

This reminds me of torchwood. =D good work…made me laugh and feel sorry for poor mary.
Abby x