Comments on Accepting The Truth (2) by Mr.Gabriel

Mostly Harmless

Using a more personal example of confusion over Charlie’s absence was a good choice, this piece works really well…

I don’t know how you’re going to move the plot on from here unless the kids discover the truth and then have to come to terms with it – are we going to get any more context to Charlie’s accident too?

Anyhoo, more good work – MH :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
.:Band Baby:.

i agree with MH, where are you going from here? Can’t wait to read more of your lovely writing. =)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

wait, what? this wasn’t over? :P
so sad, 3 year old looks at life, loss.. was this charlie’s little brother? you’re killing me!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Mr.Gabriel

Elsh…

How could it be Charlie’s little brother? Unless his parents moved without him, which would be weird…
- Posted almost 10 years ago.