As a fan of William Gibson, I’m a sucker for any writer who tells compelling stories of cyberspace. With this piece you totally nail what’s to my liking in this vein – descriptions of a cyberspace as tangible and identifiable as if describing an apple on a table. Kudos for not going overboard with that description, too.
I love this, I truly do. You manage to convey character without giving details, focusing on the story. You build tension and you have modern day greek mythology, really good.