How do you not read a story called The Mean Bean. Fun title, I am interested to see where this goes.

hey mom, so I read them all, but people are going to want to see each part attached to one another in a string that’s easier to follow. you click on the link right above Paige’s comment called Write a Sequel, then you write the next part. That way in 20 years they don’t have to go searching through the thousands of stories on ficly, they can just click the nice convenient sequel button to see the next part.

btw love the story, and welcome back

Thank you, please don’t feel like you have to read this because of my son. I’m a big girl with thick skin.

Right – so from what I can see, this could go in a really interesting direction, what with being centred around the most incredibly named coffee-shop in the world…!

Clearly this is a series starter, as it doesn’t have enough of an ending to give it any great merit as a standalone story, but for what it is, it was some good work – watch that all your sentences make total sense – ‘shed it’s crowded streets and demanding tourist’ reads a little confusingly for me, but other than that – a nice set-up. MH :)