I like this. It’s got a nice feel to it – my guess seems to have been proven – a community story told from one location – neat idea!
The beginning seemed a little slow – a bit of a mountain out of a mole-hill with the coffee confusion, but then again maybe Hector’s a bit of a stresspot!
My only real advice would be to make sure that, even if you’re writing a series, give each piece a clear ending – either some finality, or a hook which makes the reader really want to read on.
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