“The sounds of his chainsaw tearing through flesh and bone was scarring at best. " Bad use of English there, as sounds can’t really said to be scarring.

hmm… I would disagree. If sights can be scarring surely a horrid sound could be too.

Sorry, Finn, I gotta side with my weird little mechanical 80s toy friend, here. Not the sort of scarring that is the making of a wound that doesn’t heal, but the scarring that makes you need to hurl.

wow I was just going through a bunch of my stories when I noticed this one now had a sequel…haha 2 years later. But better late then never right? This is really well done! I liked it a lot!