Haha. Well written, but I think it lacks just a bit of the essence of the challenge. the only lines breaking ‘said wall’ are the first and the last with only two words: our and your. I think you could build this up a bit.

Yeah, I knew I wasn’t really following the rules. I was more going for the awareness that Captain Hero has that he’s in a comic.
Kind of breaking the wall? Not to sure I guess…

Although this does not really meet the challenge, I like the hero’s awareness of himself as a character in a comic book, with scheduled future additions. This was fun to read.

I didn’t know this was a challenge when I started reading it, but as soon as the 4th wall was broken, I got it. (I had seen the challenge title earlier.)
I liked this a lot. The melodrama was very comic-book like. It reminded me of the movie “Mystery Men” for some reason.