At this point I feel kind of stuck.

For two days I have been trying to figure out how to get from here to the next place I want to take the story. I need to figure out what will motivate talman and the others to bring them to a particular place. Of course following a clue would make sense, but what kind of clue would logically be left behind and point to another location?

Maybe an accident. Maybe some needed intel from the higher ups. I will think about it.

And if you folks have any suggestions, I’m not too proud not to listen.

I think I’d change the wording from tell to something else. Tell seems juvenile and definitely not military.

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well you came up with something.. and rashida could go either way from here..