Just having come across this story four months later, it might be a little late for comments… however, this story is well written, and very realistic: no forced dialog or anything. Good story!
Just having come across this story four months later, it might be a little late for comments… however, this story is well written, and very realistic: no forced dialog or anything.
Good story!
Hilarious premise! This was a very good idea, and well suited to Ficly.
Sam Ervin 
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